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 Sala Manor-I hope I did this right

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PostSubject: Sala Manor-I hope I did this right   Wed Sep 12, 2012 5:56 pm

**//Name://** Jordan Hershey
**//Concept://** Darc's loving baby sister
**//Faction://** BB
**//Physical Health://** 7
**//Mental Health://** 7
**//XP://**

__**Skills**__ (Spend 10 points among any number of skills, to a maximum of 5 per skill. The skills can be anything. Please have a minimum of three skills.)

**Or maybe I'm not: Confuses enemies to deflect attacks roll-3
**Hyperactivity: Enemy evasion roll-3
**You Lucky Fool: Avoid traps roll-4
__**Inventory**__

**Weapons:**
* //The Umbrella Sword// -- +1 to **Hyperactivity**

**Equipment:**
* //Compass // -- +1 to **You Lucky Fool**

//Keep in mind, you have to be able to apply an item to a situation in order to get the bonus.//

__**Perks**__ (Perks are earned)
Literacy 1- read D-C books and documents

__**Hooks**__ **Adorable gets you only so far: Doesn't attack first**

__**History**__ Jordan is the adopted baby sister of Darc. As a loving baby sister she decides its time to visit her big brother. So with suitcase in hand and a smile on her face she rings the doorbell and is welcomed to the insanity. But Jordan is a curious girl and when she's told the manor is expanding in unusual ways she can't help but explore.
**What does your character fear?**
Snakes
**What are your character's goals?**
To figure out what her goal is.
**If your character could be an animal, which one would it be?**
A Wolf...oh wait I do that every full moon...a cat.
**What is your character's dearest wish?**
To travel the world.
**Why is your character here?**
To visit her big brother.
**If your character had a tattoo, or another one, what would it be?**
The Kanji symbol for love on my right calf just behind my knee or the Triforce on my left hand.
**If your character could have any superpower, what would it be?**
Invisibility.
**What is your character's greatest weakness?**
I'm not very physically fit.
**What is your character's greatest strength?**
I'm loveable.

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PostSubject: Re: Sala Manor-I hope I did this right   Fri Sep 14, 2012 7:34 am

Let's do this...
All descriptive content is fine, save for the empty slot in: "What is your character's dearest wish?"

Next up, Skills and Hooks.

While your Skill Allocation is properly done, your skills themselves aren't skills in the sense of this RP. They need to influence rolls.

This is what I can get from adapting skills to roll comparability:

**Hyperactivity:** - Evasion of Enemy Damage Roll - 3

As for your hook, it's not really a character flaw. If you need a good, albeit lame example:
"Frail: -1 to Maximum Backpack and -1 to all rolls that involve physical activity. "

Please adapt your roster whenever it's convenient for you.
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