Day Four's Official VN/Eroge/Egg-salad Sandwich Development Thread

So, yeah, in an attempt to make this prim, proper, and not complete and utter crap, I'm opening up this thread to allow people to give suggestions, ideas, complaints, tacos, and criticism.

Now, to start, let's have some basic formatting going on here.
Because in terms of routes, we haven't gone much further than cracking jokes on the matter, here's where you can tell me if you wanna be a route in this thing. Since I'm looking for a limited amount of routes for both genders, if your route gets selected, I will likely ask you for correspondence in helping write the route, so that I don't make you horrendously out of character.

PM me with this filled out: http://pastebin.com/Ph63AJhG

And if it's:
1. Legible
2. Not full of Mary Sueism
3. Not covered in urine, jarate, or "apple juice".
4. Does not have conflicting character tropes.
5. Has a decently thought out concept.

Then I'll look into trying to write it in.

That is all for now, I wish you all a good morning/evening/pastrami, and I will speak to you when I read through a few PMs, assuming they get to me.

Also, we don't have a title.

For a sample character sheet (Review at your own descretion):
http://pastebin.com/kM1XNb4h - Darc

Some other submissions:
http://pastebin.com/Em9YR1eZ - J

http://pastebin.com/MNDYMPEk - Trace

http://pastebin.com/8zFgJi1r - Kik

Some reviews of my work on this project:

"Darc simply shows what the master race of writing is!" - Adolf Hitler

"Before reading Darc's work, I found all kinds of porn disgusting. Now I can't get to sleep the thought of being violated with tentacles comforting me!" - Gandhi

"Darc sucks major ass." - Lite

"Other than both being awesome, there is no relation between me and Darc." - Jeanne d'Arc, also known as Joan of Arc.

"I endorse this completely! Official Day Four Canon! 5/5!" - Draezeth

"DESUDESUDESUDESUDESUDESUDESUDESUDESUDESUDESUDESUDESUDESUDESUDESUDESUDESUDESUDESU." - Oldfag

"I just can't stop thinking about sucking cock after reading Darc's work!" - OP, the biggest fag of all.

Day Four: The Fictional Tale About A Website That's Also A School With Fictional People That Are Also Real.

Update to thread: Extra sheets added.

Protagonist - Garfield

Eligible Characters:
Darc/Aka - Teacher/Unknown
J - Student
Trace-114 - student
Kikren - Student
Draezeth - Maid
ThatOneAsian - Student

Other Characters:
Catspirit - Teacher
Dragon - Teacher
Panda - Student
Florian - Student
Pending:
Aka - Not Known yet

Update to thread:
Swapped Trace's character sheet to his newer one.
Added Kik's sheet.

Because most of the cast is old enough to drink, a bar scene felt necessary. Besides, I'm a drunk, so by connection, my character should be a drunk. Also, this gives room for somewhere that isn't on campus, and off-campus locations are always fun.
Here's some tracks that are under consideration for being in the bar scenes in the game.

SOUND HOLIC - Swingin' Drunk Drinkin'
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=p5J_EzQ6g_k

Amelie Official Soundtrack - Guilty
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=11EhQQ1O2UY

Frank Sinatra - Blue Moon (Version may vary)
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KJUrp-cGQyQ

I'm working on the artwork of the characters. They'll be caricatures of you guys in anime style, but I do need pictures of you so I could draw them. PM me a picture of you and I'll send them to Darc, probably.