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PostSubject: Day Four's Official VN/Eroge/Egg-salad Sandwich Development Thread   Fri Nov 23, 2012 11:27 pm

So, yeah, in an attempt to make this prim, proper, and not complete and utter crap, I'm opening up this thread to allow people to give suggestions, ideas, complaints, tacos, and criticism.

Now, to start, let's have some basic formatting going on here.
Because in terms of routes, we haven't gone much further than cracking jokes on the matter, here's where you can tell me if you wanna be a route in this thing. Since I'm looking for a limited amount of routes for both genders, if your route gets selected, I will likely ask you for correspondence in helping write the route, so that I don't make you horrendously out of character.

PM me with this filled out: http://pastebin.com/Ph63AJhG

And if it's:
1. Legible
2. Not full of Mary Sueism
3. Not covered in urine, jarate, or "apple juice".
4. Does not have conflicting character tropes.
5. Has a decently thought out concept.

Then I'll look into trying to write it in.

That is all for now, I wish you all a good morning/evening/pastrami, and I will speak to you when I read through a few PMs, assuming they get to me.

Also, we don't have a title.

For a sample character sheet (Review at your own descretion):
http://pastebin.com/kM1XNb4h - Darc

Some other submissions:
http://pastebin.com/Em9YR1eZ - J

http://pastebin.com/MNDYMPEk - Trace

http://pastebin.com/8zFgJi1r - Kik

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PostSubject: Re: Day Four's Official VN/Eroge/Egg-salad Sandwich Development Thread   Sat Nov 24, 2012 7:09 am

Day Four: The Fictional Tale About A Website That's Also A School With Fictional People That Are Also Real.

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PostSubject: Re: Day Four's Official VN/Eroge/Egg-salad Sandwich Development Thread   Sat Nov 24, 2012 9:30 am

Update to thread: Extra sheets added.
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PostSubject: Re: Day Four's Official VN/Eroge/Egg-salad Sandwich Development Thread   Sun Nov 25, 2012 8:41 am

Protagonist - Garfield

Eligible Characters:
Darc/Aka - Teacher/Unknown
J - Student
Trace-114 - student
Kikren - Student
Draezeth - Maid
ThatOneAsian - Student

Other Characters:
Catspirit - Teacher
Dragon - Teacher
Panda - Student
Florian - Student
Pending:
Aka - Not Known yet

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HAVING terminate_mode
Target name BEN, hostility confirmed. Disconnecting target's digital information
interface."


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PostSubject: Re: Day Four's Official VN/Eroge/Egg-salad Sandwich Development Thread   Mon Nov 26, 2012 12:31 am

Update to thread:
Swapped Trace's character sheet to his newer one.
Added Kik's sheet.
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PostSubject: Re: Day Four's Official VN/Eroge/Egg-salad Sandwich Development Thread   Wed Dec 05, 2012 7:23 am

Because most of the cast is old enough to drink, a bar scene felt necessary. Besides, I'm a drunk, so by connection, my character should be a drunk. Also, this gives room for somewhere that isn't on campus, and off-campus locations are always fun.
Here's some tracks that are under consideration for being in the bar scenes in the game.

SOUND HOLIC - Swingin' Drunk Drinkin'
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=p5J_EzQ6g_k

Amelie Official Soundtrack - Guilty
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=11EhQQ1O2UY

Frank Sinatra - Blue Moon (Version may vary)
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KJUrp-cGQyQ
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PostSubject: Re: Day Four's Official VN/Eroge/Egg-salad Sandwich Development Thread   Thu Dec 27, 2012 9:35 pm

I'm working on the artwork of the characters. They'll be caricatures of you guys in anime style, but I do need pictures of you so I could draw them. PM me a picture of you and I'll send them to Darc, probably.
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