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PostSubject: I don't even know...   Tue Apr 10, 2012 5:11 pm

Ok, So I wrote this on Sunday before I shut my laptop down and didn't open it for almost 2 days. i have been staring at it for almost an hour and have just decided to bite the bullet and put it up on here.

This is not just something random I wrote, this is possibly some kind of advice for people and almost a confession. Feedback about the style would be nice.
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It was always about you. Every day for far too long my life has revolved around you. I was addicted to how you made me feel; a chemical rush that nothing could relate to. But now it's over. Now I'm done. Now I'm moving on and leaving you where you belong; in my past, with every toxic feeling you've left behind.

There are times when it's hard. My memories are jaded by how I once felt. But after so long I've broken free of the chains you held me with; I'm free to spread my wings and fly. My problem is you made me melt and I don't want to be frozen anymore.

And if it so happens that this is not the end then every bad feeling I have dreged up right now will be imprinted on my brain, reminding me why I need to do this. Knowing I have done this, for the first time in almost 10 years, I feel weightless. I feel happy.

If you find yourself watching your life pass you by because of something or someone, take the chance to break away before it ruins you.

And now I take my leave... I'll see you all in a week =]

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PostSubject: Re: I don't even know...   Tue Apr 10, 2012 7:31 pm

So this is about breaking away from someone you/they love that hurt you/them? Either way, that's really well written.

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PostSubject: Re: I don't even know...   Mon Apr 16, 2012 12:40 am

Thanks Drae =]

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