Zelda RP; Crimson

Name: Crimson (The Fire Master)
Species: Human
Age: 24
Appearance: His hair colour is red that looks alot like fire and is spiky, he has a burn over his right cheek coming up from his neck, he has some muscle. No shirt, he has trousers cut at the knees that has ash all over it they are held up by belt, he has straw sandals.
Weapons: A magical long metal pole with a magical wooden torch end that gives him fire, along with six oil vials three each side and three bags of gunpowder around the back attached to his belt.
Power: The mental pole grants him him fire magic, who has fire resistance spells, he has various spells his biggest spell is large fiery explosion that can be up to a 100 metre radius although if he uses it he will nearly run out of energy and will remain unconscious for awhile but other than that he has basic and some advanced fire magic.
Personality: He very much likes to see he's enemies on fire and burning slowly and painfully to death, but he thinks of himself as a fire god (big ego) he burns whoever he sees as evil and will help whoever is being attacked by who he sees as evil. He's the type of person who get lost easily and doesn't know where he is a lot of the times. He's only one rule about killing is that he does not kill kids, because he believe kids don't know that they are doing, so kids he doesn't kill or coarse harm to, doing physical or mental harm.
Family: His Father is still alive.
Back-story: Up until the age of 7 he lived a happy life with his mother, father and younger sister, until a band of bandits come it his small village and burnt to the ground, his father being a powerful fire user saved him but was unable to save his mother and sister. After that he see fire being the most powerful form of destruction and magic, and started to train with his father to become a more powerful fire user then him, at the age of 22 he was given his magical pole from his father.
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Other Information: "You don't like killing will I do, so leave these guys to me!" is what he usually says to people who are good a heart, but don't like killing.

good Character man

People don't naturally wield fire magic, so i can't approve of this as it is. You have to have a reason why he's capable of wielding fire at all. Enchanted weaponry or gloves or things like that are allowed.

I changed it so that the pole grants him the fire magic

Alright, that's good then.

just letting you know i up graded his power.

That's pretty powerful. I think you should stick to more simple attacks, rather than powerful ones with huge drawbacks.

i pot it back to the way it was before, just seeing if i could do it or not.

Alright.