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 Panda's Poem #8

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PostSubject: Panda's Poem #8   Sun Dec 04, 2011 3:52 am

He sees the wonderous smile of his beauty queen
He sees the sweet gaze of his guardian angel
But just as quickly as the visions appear
The dark and lonely nightmares draw near
The sweet thoughts of his queen fade away
This blissful eternity seems all for naught
The memoires of two lovers dissipate into the night
And the dreams fade silent, and quickly into dust
The dancing upon the rose petals of true love
The sweet kissing under the sparkling moonlight
Holding her tightly as she whisked away to dream
These memories and many more, faded on that day
It's these things, these thoughts, and dreams
That keep their forever blazing through every night
It's the hopes of a future, and the hopes of new life
That keeps the flame on the candle of love so bright
These hopes however, seem to be dimishing so quickly
The twisting confusion makes them feel so sickly
The two seemed so close for such a short time
But things changed quickly, it stopped on a dime
The two lovers seem broken, and battered...And betrayed?
Yes, betrayed! Betrayed by their selfish needs!
Betrayed by their own darkened self conscience
Destroying the dreams that they have held so dear!
The screaming, the yelling, it's the tears they cry!
That fuel their desire! To keep the flame alive!
It's these all these things, and so much more!
That keeps them holding on to this dream!
They won't ever give in! They'll never give up!
The candle is blazing with light to their future!
These two they dreamed of having a forever!
And they will keep this dream alive together!
Their dream will stay burning bright tonight
The tears they cry together are ceasing
The smiles begin to return to her face
And she remembers that promise he made
Things had happened they had no control over
The promises became harder and harder to keep
He's kept all these promises for so very long
And nothing will stop him from doing so forever
He's vowed to hold her tightly in his grasp
To keep this memories and promises alive
He's vowed to keep that beautiful smile
Spread so wide across her sweet face
He'll do everything he can, and do it at his best
He'll take it to the limit, put it all to the test
The fire stays ablaze for the brightening future
And the love that they share, stays burning forever

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PostSubject: Re: Panda's Poem #8   Mon Dec 05, 2011 1:58 pm

Very nicely done. Its alot longer then normal. Started off thinking it was going to be a sad one but it ended happy. ^.^
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PostSubject: Re: Panda's Poem #8   Mon Dec 05, 2011 5:24 pm

All of my poems are random in length. But I'm glad you liked it =D

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