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PostSubject: Story idea - opinions plox   Sun Sep 07, 2014 3:55 pm

Basically, it's gonna be a shitty story about twins who have never let anyone into their world because no one could tell them apart. They have friends, but they're not really close to them. A new girl transfers to their school and she can tell the difference between them. They both like her but she only likes one of them which is why she can tell them apart. Because they aren't used to having friends (They only really started hanging out with other people at the start of the school year) they don't really know how to act around her. It's basically a coming of age story about how the twins learn to deal with people and learn to let others into their world.

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PostSubject: Re: Story idea - opinions plox   Sun Sep 07, 2014 5:24 pm

Go for it, says I. It's a good premise.

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PostSubject: Re: Story idea - opinions plox   Mon Sep 08, 2014 6:38 am

It sounds really close to that one episode of Ouran where the Hikaru and Kaoru dye their hair different colors because they're tired of people not being able to tell the difference besides Haruhi. And then they fight about it the whole episode, which turns out to be an elaborate trick to get Haruhi to do something with them but I forget what. It's been a while since I've watch Ouran but I did like that episode.

Really from the start I was thinking of Hikaru and Kaoru.

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PostSubject: Re: Story idea - opinions plox   Mon Sep 08, 2014 7:11 am

I admit I got the idea from Ouran but there are a lot less characters (The twins, the main chick and 2 others that are the twins' friends) And the personalities are wildly different from Hikaru and Kaoru (Although they did start out as expies, they turned into completely different characters the more I thought about them)

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